News stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by picture. Some people say that these picture are more effective than words.What is your opinion for this?

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News stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by picture. Some people say that these picture are more effective than words.
What is your opinion for this?

yes, the news storied on TV and newspapers accompanied by pictures are very affective. Suppose you are reading a newspaper in hurry and you are just taking a overview of the news headlines, you will look at the pictured first. by looking at the pictured we get a rough idea about the news and incident which is mentioned in the newspaper for our knowledge and information. as we all know pictured are always better than words as they give a overall overview of the incident which connects us to the reality of it and we might not connect to words the same way as pictures do.

Also there is a strong reason that there pictures should be chosen very carefully so that the important news can get our attention real quick. Suppose there is a article on the front page stating about a murder case in which the victim was hanged to the roof. it might be not very bothering when you read it but what if we have the picture right in front of us. we could feel the moment of heat and injustice done to the victim and also we would have an idea about the situation.

media nowadays uses different method to get attention of the public for marketing and to sell their newspaper like any other newspaper company. i don't know how they get such audacity to use this for their marketing and to increase the business.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
yes, the news storied on TV and newspapers ...
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Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...spaper in hurry and you are just taking a overview of the news headlines, you wil...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...s, you will look at the pictured first. by looking at the pictured we get a rough ...
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Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...aper for our knowledge and information. as we all know pictured are always better ...
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Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e always better than words as they give a overall overview of the incident which ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... words the same way as pictures do. Also there is a strong reason that there pic...
^^^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... attention real quick. Suppose there is a article on the front page stating about...
^
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Suggestion: It
...hich the victim was hanged to the roof. it might be not very bothering when you re...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Media
...d have an idea about the situation. media nowadays uses different method to get a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...paper like any other newspaper company. i dont know how they get such audacity to...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...per like any other newspaper company. i dont know how they get such audacity to use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44813278008 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37532206692 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547717842324 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.363832674 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200151664965 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916102871613 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929924052127 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123080005894 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571240249408 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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