Renowned personalities have been influencing the common people positively and negatively from the beginning of their career due to their activities. It is stated that in these days, superstars are more eminent because of their elegant looks and richness as compared to their accomplishments and this trend not going to be examplary for youngsters. I partially agree with the statement and my partial agreement will be articulated in following paragraphs prior to reaching conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that celebrities are popular for their glamour and possessions. However, it can leave negative impression on young due to some reasons. The most prevalent factor behind this is that sometimes young ones are attracted towards luxurious lifestyle of famous people owing to considering them their role models. For example, in India, superstars often show their stunning pictures and expensive things on social media and smoking is also promoted by some of them. These sort of activities is usually followed by their blind fans in order to become similar to whom the fan of. Hence, it is quite evident that why such kind of activities of famous personalities are preveailing.
paradoxically, there are some celebrities who are renowned for their attainments and they are inspirational too for young individuals owing to some factors. The worthmentioning reason for this is that the hard work celebrities have done always become example for those people who are struggling to achieve their goals. For instance, Bollywood actor Diljit dosanjh did a lot of hard work to reach that level on which he is now. The followers of this super star learning numerous good things from him which encouraging them to do Noble act and work constantly to achieve the desiring goals. Therefore, it is enough to prove that soms celebrities are settings tremendous examples.
In conclusion, after throwing light on partial agreement from my perspective, some famous personalities misleading the youngsters mainly because of their none appreciable acts. However, several superstars are inspiring the people for having bright future by doing good deeds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36201780415 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97271030837 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3986177622 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375047524793 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114989908848 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798937015791 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214389998299 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547631463574 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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