relevance of the tourism at the outset of the new millennium is inescapable and significant due to having considerable impacts on both people and economy.it is stated that worldwide tourism came up with advantages for certain spots. However, it also seemed a threat to the native people and environment owing to its effects. I consider that both pros and cons are equal and will be articulated in the upcoming paragraphs before writing an appropriate conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that, tourism has become most precious because of its unexpected positive outcomes. The main reason behind this is that international tourism not only helps a particular country to emerge but also it provides the unique identity to nation. For example, India is a luxurious jungle of attractive places which constantly taking many people's attention. Through this India now has become a most reached destination by foreigners. The another benefit of it is that different sorts of employment opportunities are offered by it especially to local individuals due the urgent demand. Hence, it is enough to make it clear that tourism has a host of fruitful positives.
Although tourism has many advantages we can't neglect its dark shades. The main disadvantage is that it disturbs the environment to a large extent because of unhealthy habits of folks. For instance, in India, near the Taj mahal the area is totally polluted and it will become hard to stay there in upcoming years owing to the pollution. The another negative is that sometimes tourists leave such a kind of impression on local people of their own culture which can lead extinction of culture and language in a country. Thus, it is proved that tourism can become extremely dangerous to a country.
In conclusion, after analysing both the pros and cons about tourism, from my mind, tourism is highly superficial for generating jobs and exploring different things. However, it can prove as a danger if people will not control to being careless towards environment and that will ruin the atmosphere as a whole.
- Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment people must use less energy in their daily lives However most people have not changed the way they live Why do you think many people have not taken individual action What could be done to encoura 59
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison What do you think are the causes of this What possible solutions can you suggest 89
- Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved What are the drawbacks 84
- More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list What are the reasons for this What can be done to solve this problem 84
- More people are now behaving more violently in society than before Can this behaviour be prevented Discuss the causes and reasons for this trend Provide examples to support your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08259587021 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86190123461 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4122678514 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251759997316 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712090400228 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534589065213 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140838257631 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235189105927 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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