Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than politicians.. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Influencers are famous figures who have an influential role in their society. In the modern are, it is argued that, celebrities get more funds than political people. I am of the view that, it has a detrimental impact at society. This essay first will lock to the reasons of this, and then discuss why it is a negative development.
To begin with, nowadays, social media applications have become a salient feature. Not only has it a widespread but also it is cheaper to catch it. Therefore, if owners and producers wanted to announce for their products, they would ask celebrities to do that; they give them money. According to a survey has been done by the Economist showed that the annual income of Influencers at social media is more than Teachers, Doctors and politicians. Having given this example, it is suggested that Officials should impose restrictions to tackle this issue.
One main negative consequence of this problem is that it is effect on morals and values of society. As an illustration, it has a negative effect on the future generation because they start to imitate them. some adult start to believe that working in social media application such as Facebook and Snapchat It worth than education; they will get more money faster and by easy way. For Instance, an article has been published by The New York time showed that most of Youth wanted to be influencers at social media instead to be Engineers.
It can be conclude that, the power of social media has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses; Therefore, Famous figures have become an integral part from people’s Lives. Hence, they earn more money than others which has a negative effect in values and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84353741497 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67118352711 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1642694302 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218545671898 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707976748138 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700926403575 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135513241762 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017429467094 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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