In the fifth generation, Children now spend too much time electronics gadgets like computers and cell phones. They have great influence on the cognitive and psychological health of children. This has both positive and negative development. I believe that children should have to maintain a balance between computer games and sports. Both indoor and outdoor activities are equally essential for the overall development of children.
On one hand, Sports have imperative impact on children's health. Generally, sports are group activities so it required more than one individual for playing all activities like cricket, football, badminton. Throughout, the children learn the skill of leadership, cooperation, management, an interactive skill. Besides, Computer games are also played an isolated role in building the online world. Not only they evolve their skills and knowledge such as 3d animation, creativity, fantasy by playing those but also helps to utilize the leisure time in an optimal way.
On the other hand, If children spend too much time on computer games, they might be terrible for psychological and physical development. For example, some children are very addicted to games and they do not perform their homework. Moreover, the spend several hours to accomplish their targets, this may lead to obesity and diabetes. Secondly, those children who access computer in several hours, they also like to explore inappropriate material on the internet. Thirdly, with the over usage of computer games children would be more aggressive and adamant.
Consequently, It is very difficult to ascertain that the advantages are overweighed by the disadvantage of computer games. Therefore, the assistance of adults and parents are required to eradicate limits. Here required to maintain a proper balance between sports and computer games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an optimal way" with adverb for "optimal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... also helps to utilize the leisure time in an optimal way. On the other hand, If children spe...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o not perform their homework. Moreover, the spend several hours to accomplish their targe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57651245552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89314432137 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4700405668 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314186762704 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922183548586 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551304312722 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176079676823 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942615405278 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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