Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been using your service for more than 5 years, and I am writing with regard to suggestions I would like to provide.
I really enjoy the quiet and comfortable environment, which is quite conducive to my study. With all your stuff members being really kind and supportive, I believe all visitors here feel welcomed and relaxed.
There are something I do not like very much too. The current close time is 7 p.m. that I think is too early for working people. Also, some procedures are not very straightforward to follow. For example, I need to come to the library and fill up several forms to get my borrowed book extended.
In my opinion, you could hold more activities involving readers, in particular lectures given by local writers. And more digital contents would be great as more and more readers are used to E-readers. As mentioned above, it can save the time and energy of both readers and your stuff members to make it possible to manage our accounts online.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kevin Young
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, for example, i think, in particular, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71657754011 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58703070037 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5774482738 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132549859011 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425184064155 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431998096879 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702476092866 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445771837807 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.