Tourism is thriving around the world and people are quite enjoy their journeys, long or short. There are a variety of reasons for it and wonderful things tourists gain from it.
In my opinion, three factors contribute to the growing popularity of traveling. Firstly, the costs of transportation , in terms of money and time, are decreasing significantly, due to the modern infrastructure, such as highways, high-speed rails and airports. Either you are traveling by a private car or public transportation means, it is much easier to get to your destination nowadays. Secondly, the pop culture makes people think positively about traveling and most of us believe it a cool way of self-expression or so. Thirdly, tourism is considered a greener way by many governmental authorities to boost the economy.
Though we cannot ignore the shortcomings of tourism, traveller can get plenty of benefits themselves. It brings great memories to them, especially for people who travel with their friends or beloved family members. It is an effective way to strengthen the connection and sometimes can be the remedy to repair it. Just imagine how curing it could be to sit side by side with someone you love on the beach with warm breezes. Furthermore, traveling is a great way to escape from boring daily routines and bings back your inner peace, be it a hiking trip to local hills or a luxury one to oversea attractions.
In conclusion, we can expect that this trend would last for years to come and many reason help making it more and more popular. By spending time on road, traveller get many benefits, great memories and love in particular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95012872671 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0013989151 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222009724913 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665895519496 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610870931052 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120963607172 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462804065489 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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