Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to your recent letter to me, which claims there is $240 overdrawn of my account and will soon charge me $70. It is unacceptable and I carried out my own investigation by checking my transaction records.
After my initial investigation, this claim is not true. My current account balance is around $2, 000 and I have not withdrawn from it for more than two months. You can do a quick fact check within your system to verify it.
I need some official clarification from your bank about this embarrassing situation and what caused it. If there are any flaws in your working procedures, you really need to identify them and apply any measures deemed necessary to correct it. As this kind of incidents are really frustrating, please make sure there is no more occurrence to me or any other customers of your bank.
I have been using your professional financial services for years and sincerely appreciate all your kindness and efforts. Thus, I am fully confident that you will address this issue as soon as possible. If you need any further communication, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kevin Young
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, thus, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84541062802 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80033529665 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661835748792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6028387938 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340380860192 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108567273038 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545834624975 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190546882584 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455260847722 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.