Presently children's playing habit has been changed drastically because of the influence of modern technology. They love to spend most of their time infront of computers and video gaming platforms. There are various reasons behind this change in kids attitude. In my opinion, this practice will definitely negatively effect their future development.
Nowadays, kids are very fascinated about the technological gadgets, they always wants to get a hands on experience on such devices especially for digital gaming purposes. Everything around us is running on these small gadgets and people use these devices for almost everything. Children also following this trend by copying their parents and youngsters. Furthermore, because of the urban life style, most of the homes don't have proper outside playing areas for kids, eventually they will end up in experiencing digital entertainment devices. Moreover, these so called video games offer to experience a virtual reality world to these infants that they can not experience in the real world, this also attracting more kids in to such games.
Recent studies by scientists revealed that these games are actually effecting children's future development process both physically and mentally. Sometimes they may get addicted to such games and loose their interest in other activities especially in studies. In addition, many of these game are promoting violence, this might create some bad influence on children as they are very vulnerable to such conditions. What is more, this also effect kids physical health as they are sitting long time in a place result in weight gain and related issues. Kids are at their growth stage needs to engage in physical activities such as outdoor games for a healthy body and mind.
In conclusion, kids addiction to digital games are something that needs to be monitored closely in order to avoid future problems. It doesn't mean that they should be completely restricted on enjoying such games but rather should encourage them to keep a good balance in their hobbies.
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- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don t really need them Why is it happening in your opinion Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society 67
- Some people agree that teachers should be strict with their students; others believe that teachers with friendly approach will achieve better results. Discuss and give your opinion. 78
- Behavior in schools is getting worse Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solution 73
- The topic is taken from Cambridge book of IELTS 9, writing task 1 test 3The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feat 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... the technological gadgets, they always wants to get a hands on experience on such de...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: a hand; hands
...gical gadgets, they always wants to get a hands on experience on such devices especiall...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the urban life style, most of the homes dont have proper outside playing areas for k...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...they may get addicted to such games and loose their interest in other activities espe...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y in order to avoid future problems. It doesnt mean that they should be completely res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69876149548 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7971559777 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191008996852 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672631059059 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050024722284 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122289976343 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591538972916 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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