Nowadays countries are finding it difficult to deal with the ever increasing number of criminals. Authorities are spending such a lot of tax payers money on maintaining corruption facilities, but sadly number of crime and law breakers are increasing day by day. What is more worrying is that, the criminals are committing new crimes even after the period of their correction time and end up in prisons again, there are some reasons behind this scenario.
To start with, most of the correction facilities are providing horrifying environment for the inmates, that makes them more aggresive towards the society and systems. Furthermore many people are end up in prisons because of accidental crimes or the conditions they were trapped in to. When sending such persons in prisons may influence their further behavior. There would be a great chance that, inmates may negatively influence these persons. Eventually their time in prison might result in more harm than good. Moreover, societies also should be blamed for this scenario, normally when a person commits a crime the people immediately tag him as a criminal without considering other factors. Eventually he will end in a situation where he can't be lived among the society as a normal individual.
Inorder to prevent these law breakers from doing another crimes, the system should show some mercy up on them. Especially towards those who commit minor crimes. Instead of sending them to prisons, they can be used for mandatory social services as a punishment for their crimes. In addition, the prison facilities should be maintained in a more humane manner, by providing mental supports to the people's who wants come out of their past life. Besides this, authorities can give more practical training to the prison mates to find a living when they come out their time in prison.
To recapitulate, to tackle down the repeated crimes of criminals, authorities and societies should work together in an effective manner. They should also understand that mistakes are part of human life, so we should help them to come out of their wrong doings without cursing them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Suggestion: come; to be come
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1181556196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67045763916 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3320988878 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162593626907 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504468954527 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479535203868 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956014612725 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02829234881 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.