With the advancements in field of computer and technology, communication has become much more efficient and fast process. People can send and recieve messages in blink of an eye with the help of new inventions. This has not only improved lifestyle of people but also changed viewpoint of people. This essay tends to justify my viewpoint with the help of certain examples.
To commence with, In the past communication was bit difficult as technological advancements were not made and people used to send letters, telegrams to their near and dear ones to convey messages, delivering of letters took about a month. Despite being time consuming process, it was also costly and not available at certain times.
So, it was very difficult to make contact with our relatives and moreover no facility was provided during the time of emergency.
During the recent decades growth in the sector of technology has brought eminent changes that has subsequently affected lifestyle of people in positive way. Latest Developments and state of art gadgets and gizmos like tablets, mobile phones, email, video calls have made our life much easier and smoother. With teh easy affordability and accessibility of internet people can talk to their loved ones within a second. For instance- One can see what is happening in another country through a video call, People can send their work through emails sitting at home, we can attend meeting sitting even miles far away. These new advancements have made our life as flat as a pancake and effortless.
In conclusion, having discussed this topic in detail, I take the view state of art gadgets and gizmos have indubitably developed the lifestyle of people and changed the mindset of people and led to increase in productivity. It has made our life well ordered and unwrinkled.
- Nowadays communicating with others is faster and easier thanks to technology like email cellular phones and beepers Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08053691275 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7694791684 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6875393676 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17527563921 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593754017971 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446318676924 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887209782653 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426294398968 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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