Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era, without any qualms, it is accepted that in people's lives consumer commodities turned to become highly essential in people lives. While it is possible to claim that people will become addictive and fall under financial debt. However, as far as I am concerned, both the merits and drawbacks must be pondered upon before concluding which weigh in more worth.
On the one hand, one of the paramount advantage associated with consumer products is it saves a person's time. For instance, people often use a computer to order personals through e-commerce websites from their place, instead of driving to brick-and-mortar stores. As a result, it cut down the unnecessary travelling and saves time. Furthermore, it has a huge transition over humans life and made it more comfortable. For example, in earlier household chores like washing and cleaning requires a lot of human effort, which now can be through washing machines and vacuum-cleaner. Therefore, consumers can reap the benefits of these products.
On the flip side, there are some disadvantages to adopting these commodities. First of all, relying highly on gadgets like smartphones, laptops, PlayStation's would make a person materialistic. Moreover, buying high-end products like 3D television and Smartphones would cost a massive amount of money, and that need to be paid through instalments, which result in unwanted financial debts. Consequently, a person may lose frugality and societies may become dysfunctional.
To conclude, I firmly agree that the merits of the consumer goods on people's daily lives outweigh the drawbacks; where it save people time and provide a convenient lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43511450382 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04989298365 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2750851369 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166752114768 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503141767625 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063859433285 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104673991058 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608981155925 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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