Nowadays culture is different is some ways compare to the past.Do you think the culture development has a positive or negative trend.
It is undoubtedly clear, that there are vast changes in culture over a few decades. While there are some beneficial factors due to this trend, there are also significant drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several benefits because of the change in culture. First,people are updated on the recent trend, which helps them to move along with the fast world and makes their life uncomplicated. Second, it also saves an individual from the inferiority complex. As an example, when everyone around a person is in modern values ,it will automatically force him to feel lowliness if he is not updated. Third, it is always stunning to have the different exposure rather the always following the same method, especially, youth want to try different things in every aspect.
On the other hand, modern culture creates substantial problems too. One problem is that citizens may forgot to preserves their own culture, tradition, and customs followed by the ancestors leading to an example for the future generation. Sometimes, there are also chances for the extinction of many rituals and practices. Another problem is the extravagance, the upgrade in culture plays a vital role among youngsters. For example, teenagers are more addicted to the plethora of awful habits like excessive smoking, boozing etc., moreover, to an extent where they are not even to ready listen to their parents.
To conclude, changes are inevitable everywhere and culture is no exception. I feel that there is nothing wrong in accepting the modern culture, as far as, we are within our limit. Furthermore, it is responsible of every individual to not forget his or her own customs and followings.
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Suggestion: , people
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...,it will automatically force him to feel lowliness if he is not updated. Third, i...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'preserve'.
Suggestion: preserve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, while, for example, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7999392368 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9948144701 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110764472147 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364735660639 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423369639544 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709423787545 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360821820267 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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