The only thing, eternal in this world is "change", it is the biggest truth that nothing in this world is permanent. Although some people still believe in the notion of traditional joint family structure where people used to be close to each other. However, in modern era, the ideology of living of all the family members together under one roof is quite unrealistic.
Though, there are many reasons for this drastic change but the most important factor I think, is the employment opportunities. That is, in earlier times people used to stay in their own villages to help parents taking care of their family business or farming. Due to this they used to spent time together, share their problems and celebrate festivals altogether. Hence, they used to get connected strongly with each other emotionally. Conversely, nowadays, young generation is migrating to cities because of more job opportunities and thus getting detached from their roots and parents as well.
In addition, the cost of living has risen to great extent as compared to bygone. In current situation it is difficult to sustain with only one person earning in a family. So, both husband and wife has to work which leads to less spare time to spend with family. This in turn not only creates a communication barrier between family members but also makes the bonding feeble.
Though, there are many more issues that have emerged this problem but I firmly believe that this scenario can definitely be changed. I can certainly say that with efforts and will power solution to every problem can be find out. For example, if a family decides to go out on weekends with their parents, grandparents, uncle and aunts to spend some quality time with each other then I am sure that they will soon develop intimacy.
To recapitulate, I would like to assert on a point that a family is the most important part of everyone's life because the love and care that we receive from family members is inestimable and irreplaceable. So, one should do everything to have a close knit family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat nothing in this world is permanent. Although some people still believe in the notion...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...ts to spend some quality time with each other then I am sure that they will soon develop i...
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Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...spend some quality time with each other then I am sure that they will soon develop i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69704995838 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4551122461 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243763880406 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689758959826 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048810335034 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124904447147 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373075865585 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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