Nowadays the increased amount of garbage (waste) is a real concern. Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this?
The population is increasing all over the world, people demand raised on several needs, but they are not dealing with it in a conscious manner. Many factors lead to increase in garbage and drive to pollution; so, people should be aware and find a final solution to stop this disaster from covering the earth.
Waste comes from human being, he/she are not responding correctly to the facts that is causing it. First, people are throwing their rubbish randomly on the roads, oceans or rivers; some from homes or chemicals litters from factories, because of the absence of public control. Second, lack of awareness campaigns, from the governments, organization and schools, where recycling isn’t taking place; pollution and diseases are increasing and ruining the societies. For example, in 2015 Lebanon passed through a big pollution disaster, where wastes covered all the streets, due to the absence of the state and political decisions, that kept people until today throwing their garbage randomly, without treatment.
On the other hand, many solutions can be provided to decrease the size of garbage, in order to benefit a clean life. First, the government, schools and NGOs must work together and increase their awareness campaigns for their people and showing what causes they might face if they reached to the maximum of wastes in their country. Second, recycling firms must be implemented in all nations, and oblige everyone to recycle, if they disobey the rules they should be fined, addition many materials need to be banned that is damaging the environment such as, plastic and fuels; even encourage people to use alternative and recycled products. For example, I was watching a documentary about Sweden, how the government benefit from the rubbish, and turn it into electricity for its cities and soil organics for plants.
As a conclusion, waste is increasing more and more each day because of human, that is acting with his environment dangerously. There is several solutions must be taken from the government and people, to live in an healthy and unpolluted green earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a conscious manner" with adverb for "conscious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...needs, but they are not dealing with it in a conscious manner. Many factors lead to increase in garba...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... Waste comes from human being, he/she are not responding correctly to the facts t...
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Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are several solutions'?
Suggestion: There are several solutions
...cting with his environment dangerously. There is several solutions must be taken from the government and p...
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Line 13, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...m the government and people, to live in an healthy and unpolluted green earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21238938053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64370317375 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589970501475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3267316936 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.25 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134607476458 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483008661883 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381905727214 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843291781188 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304234025499 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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