Nowadays, many adults play video games. Is it good or bad development? Give you opinion and include relevant examples from your personal experience
It is true that a lot of elderly started playing video games, I would like to give my opinion and mention the positive and negative effects of this change.
First of all, video gaming has many positive effects irrespective of the age. It boost up the concentration to an incredible level if played regularly for a year or more. A recent survey conducted by BBC stated, ten out of hundred adults started playing video games in United States in the year 2018 and surprisingly, most of the family members expressed their happiness to see them changed in a good way. Report also bring's out interesting factors about their changes in workplace. Companies started to see improvement also in their revenue's and the head's of few companies openly commented the reason behind this is due to the increased productivity level's shown by the gamer's of that respective organization.
On the contrary, there are some negative impacts as well but, I feel they are comparatively low than the plus side. There are high changes of getting addicted to the game play. This will impact seriously in their family life's and personally. China temporarily imposes a ban on the gaming center's until 2020 December in order to keep its citizens far from the industry. For example, one of my colleague in the previous organization from china use to play a lot of video gaming. He is warned several times by the family members as well as his managers in our company but none of those warnings had stopped him. Due to the continuous playing for about 2 years, he lost his both eyes followed by his job.
To summarize, even though video gaming can have negative impact's on the lifestyle of the people, those can be controlled by counselling and by having self-control. Video gaming effectively helps out for development of one's lifestyle. The culture should be surely encouraged in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, i feel, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86833855799 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7376482637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9577018946 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148029855349 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462261694228 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045216870387 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962402771791 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361465483596 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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