Nowadays many parents believe that children’s use of tablets or computers would be good for their future academic careers. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a belief? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
In recent years, a whole lot of animal species have become extinct due to increasing needs of human beings. The question is, how long before we really take an action to prevent this from happening?
The human greed of earning money by killing animals is widely known. If we consider the very infamous killing of Tigers, for instance, their population is much less as compared to what it was a decade ago. Humans have always tried to hunt tigers, kill them and utilize them in different possible ways. As a result, their population has been reduced to approximately a few thousands.
A lot of NGOs like PETA are working towards animal welfare; providing them good care, proper food and shelter so that no specie has to go through what Tigers have been facing since years. However, despite various efforts from different NGOs to save such poor creatures, there are still few people who continue to torture animals for their own benefits and motives. Tigers for their skin, cows for leather, hens, sheep and pigs for meat products, some birds for their beaks are to name a few. As a second step, people can spread awareness by doing different campaigns for Animal’s welfare. This way thousands of animals will be saved and would eventually stop being extinct.
To conclude, it is high time humans stop being selfish and benefit themselves by hunting such creatures. If this doesn’t reduce, the time is not far when Earth will be without any animal that could survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
In recent years, a whole lot of animal species have become extinct d...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...instance, their population is much less as compared to what it was a decade ago. H...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roviding them good care, proper food and shelter so that no specie has to go thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, second, so, still, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42968643353 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4749287172 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165435657686 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548705796176 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510918792656 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082771434371 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665306519067 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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