The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world's
cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in
use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more.
Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport.
Today, number of vehicles are touching heights, which has been resulting in huge amount of traffic in cities. This essay will discuss the issue and chalk out the methods that must be adopted to fix it.
There are various reasons as to why people use private transport – one of which is time saving. For example, while going to work, people do not need to wait for the buses at bus stops. Secondly, personal automobiles are much more convenient and provide comfort that can never be expected from Auto rickshaws and Buses. These factors lead to high congestion on roads, thus, increasing air pollution.
Saving time by using your own vehicle does not happen anymore. With increasing number of automobiles on roads, people are stuck in traffic for hours. This not only causes irritation and frustration but also degrades health in the long run. Constructing Metro in every congested areas should be step one. The government should also increase security on smaller routes to avoid bigger vehicles to enter. Toll tax should be levied on the extremely busy roads. Instead of paying this tax every day, people would rather prefer paying money for the public transport, which would be relatively cheaper.
To conclude, public transport need to be made convenient for the people to use on a daily basis. Alternatively, stringent policies need to be implemented if we really want to reduce the congestion on roads. Otherwise, with the large number of people migrating to big cities, this problem would never be resolved.
- Many students do not finish school. Why is this, and how can the problem besolved? 73
- Some people prefer to work for a large company.Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice 84
- Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period oftime instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages anddisadvantages of both approaches.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples f 78
- In some countries people spend a lot of money on their pets They buy special food for their cats or dogs buy them toys and often pay high fees for medical treatment Some people think this is a waste of time What are the advantages and disadvantages of hav 31
- Many students do not finish school Why is this and how can the problem be solved 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., this problem would never be resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04743083004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52094601378 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640316205534 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3466999801 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148896514445 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490307548596 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308299276782 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951217390073 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102193186854 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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