Anorexia is a life threatening illness, especially affecting young women’s but not only limited to them only. People are increasingly diagnosed with this disorder which is point of concern. This essay will examine the causes of illness and possible solutions we have in our hand.
At the onset, anorexia is an eating cum emotional disorder. Yet the world scientists have not been able to pinpoint the exact cause of this illness. However, it is widely held belief that it could be a combination of three factors: biological, physiological and environment. The biological stand point: some people posses’ genetic tendency towards perfectionism, perseverance and sensitivity. The psychological standpoint: some people especially omen might have obsessive compulsive personality disorder traits that makes them stick to strict diet and to skip food despite being hungry. The environmental standpoint: being thin is beautiful; and such obsession with young girls drags them to anorexia, too.
As long as anyone who suffers from anorexia generally, the only solution available for them is to seek a professional medical help from doctors. However, there are solutions to snap out of disorder for sure. Misconception of being skinny is more beautiful is challenged today. For example, the popular Hollywood actress Kate Winslet, openly claims that she is blessed with her body curves than skinny. Her claim corroborates the fact that she is adored by tens of thousands people in the world yet. Thus, it proves that girls look prettier with angular frame than being skinny.
In nut shell, anorexia developed generally is curable, but it is a time consuming process while anorexia develop from other reasons has a cure by changing the mindset and not to surrender to misconception.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and to skip food despite being hungry. The environmental standpoint: being thin i...
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Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng hungry. The environmental standpoint: being thin is beautiful; and such obsess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36785714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92084127873 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4185948579 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19433110599 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594453239298 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434662627555 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1118886378 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465200657565 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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