Healthy lifestyle comes with healthy and nourished food. Healthy diet contains availability of all nutrients with proper amount of proteins, vitamins, carbohydrates, minerals, iron and calcium presence. And all these important nutrients we can get only in home made food.
But in today's world mostly new generation believes that by ready made food they can save their precious time, if they are doing job or they are students. Because of their busy schedule these people does not get enough time to cook food at home. As they thought that in the meanwhile time they can do something more productive.But somehow they are risking their health over earning money because ready made food could be unhygienic for health. Sometimes there are possibilities too that ready made food items could be made up of expired food items.
Due to the development in technology now we have more places for order food like Zomato, Swiggy, Urban eats, Food panda and various other restaurants. But as we heard already about so many cases in recent times, where many people get contaminated and improperly packed food, and sometimes expired also. Ready made food items contains high amount of oil, fatty acids, and carbs which sometimes can cause serious illness to health.
But sometimes ready made food items could be prove good because firstly it saves time, and secondly making some food items at home could be costly than ready made food, can be stored for long time, easy to handle and to travel.
Some choose ready made food items because they do not know how to cook food and to avoid food wastage they refused to cook food at home. But in any terms there can be nothing more healthy, fruitful, nutritious and energetic than home made food which will direct lead to healthy and prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey are doing job or they are students. Because of their busy schedule these people doe...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t get enough time to cook food at home. As they thought that in the meanwhile time...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...e they can do something more productive.But somehow they are risking their health o...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...erly packed food, and sometimes expired also. Ready made food items contains high am...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to ready'
Suggestion: to ready
...o handle and to travel. Some choose ready made food items because they do not kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93708609272 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35080915238 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1442297674 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263487829765 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111266552973 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077535844022 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163689930525 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701233216375 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.