In the 21st century, people have become more target-oriented. They want to achieve their goals in a short time at any cost and do not hesitate to compromise with anything such as family, leisure time and food. Most of the people prefer to eat ready-made food as it saves lots of time, energy, efforts and money but it also negatives impact on health. The following essay will discuss some of the reasons why more and more people are getting attracted to fast food along with some positive and negative effects.
Let us begin by looking at the pros of fast food, First and foremost reason is that it saves time, there are many young adults who are highly occupied with the work and can not afford to waste a minute of their time so ready-made food comes as a blessing for them. For example, there are many dishes like chicken, rice, and lentils which takes more time to cook, moreover, it requires an additional hour to clean the dishes so fast food helps them to focus more on work instead of cooking. Another advantage is that it saves money as there is no need to buy raw material to prepare lunch and dinner. To illustrate, rice pudding, an Indian dessert, requires rice, milk, sugar and dry fruits and an expert to prepare it tasty & delicious so it involves money in buying goods and paying salary to cook.
On the other hand, there are many negatives of processed food and soft drinks. Firstly, you can not be sure about the freshness and cleanliness of the vegetables used. For instance, there are many people who complained that the food delivered to them is stale or mixed with rotten salad. Secondly, junk food does not contain the necessary minerals, proteins, and enough calories. Take school children as an example, students who eat unhealthy food regularly and less energetic and does not perform well in academics and sports events. Finally, accessive usage of fast food damage the health in the long term, there are thousands of patients in the hospitals suffering from a plethora of disease caused due to the consumption of pizza, burger & sandwiches.
To summarize, there are few positives of readymade food in terms of time, money and effort saving but it has more deleterious health issues like obesity, asthma, heart attack, etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77493606138 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42611491431 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572890025575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6955996782 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.466666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169944397103 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561837949931 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268282145078 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967732800079 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296368503973 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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