Nowadays many species of animals and plants are in danger of becoming extinct. what do you think the reasons are? what can you suggest as a solution?
It is obvious that recently the number of animals and plants have become endangered all over the world. In this essay, The causes and solutions will be discussed.
The most important reason for the diminution of animal and plant species is the reckless environmental development. the area of forest has been lost every year around the world. In my hometown, which has beautiful rainforests and is well-known for its tourist attractions, the numerous trees have been cut down to widen the road.
Besides, the emission of Co2 produced by human activities causes the air and water pollution as well as the health problems of all species on earth. we all should be aware that this is a significant threat for not only animals and plants but also human beings’ lives.
On the other hand, it may be difficult to find effective and feasible solutions but the action to save animals and plants shouldn’t be stopped. First, the government must implement policies forcibly to reserve forests and broaden more green spaces such as parks and artificial lakes. Moreover, providing bikes and electric public transport will reduce the air and water pollution. In consequence, we will have a healthy body.
To conclude, I firmly believe that animals and plants have as much right to survive as a human does. Therefore, we should be aware of all these issues and take action individually as well as with the support from the government to protect all species for our generation and future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ealth problems of all species on earth. we all should be aware that this is a sign...
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...policies forcibly to reserve forests and broaden more green spaces such as parks ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09638554217 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75284727038 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2922904964 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11168438921 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425681958071 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464155438685 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068365254133 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237767605976 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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