Nowadays many women are joining the police and military forces. However, some people believe that these jobs are not suitable for women. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Dynamics of society are changing dramatically these days as women are also pursuing their career in defense services. However, it is believed by few individuals that this trend is not appropriate. I support gender equality in employment, and agree that women should be permitted to work in armed forces, and also I would like to shed some light on both views.
To begin with, women should not be sidelined for recruitment in police or armed forces because it would be utterly unfair and unconstitutional for them. In fact, selection for these services should be based on skills, academic background and relevant work-experience. Indian army is the best example of this as it has been recruiting female officers for a long time. Additionally, other qualities are also required in these professionals such as leadership, planning, team-work and communication which are perfectly exhibited by women officers at their respective work-places. For example, an Indian Air-force female officer was given an opportunity to lead all three forces because of her capabilities when USA honorary President Mr. Barack Obama visited New Delhi for the first time in 2016.
On the contrary, it is a general impression that women officers are unable to deal with dreaded criminals; moreover, they even feel uncomfortable during interrogation sessions with serial killers and rapists. For instance, in some countries, female officers have been recruited only for desk-jobs only such as managing documents and filling reports at police stations rather than for core jobs from sometime. Apart from this, they have less physical strength as compared to their male counterparts and due to this key reason, females have negative image in the society and they are not being treated as respectful officers in defense services.
In conclusion, although women are considered to be frail in muscular power and tackling barbarian criminals during interrogation, they have plethora of qualities and skills that are supremely demanding in these services.
- Employers should pay young people the same salary as older colleagues doing the same job To what extent do you agree or disagree 70
- Nowadays many women are joining the police and military forces However some people believe that these jobs are not suitable for women Discuss both views and give your opinion 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40694006309 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97614969154 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1368391831 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192391858331 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072998094952 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408442905366 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118372729451 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421814418947 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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