Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?
In this modern era, everyone wants to lead a successful life by getting higher studies that lead us to appropriate work but for this young people has to leave their comfort zone at an early age. This topic will discuss the merits and demerits for the statement in upcoming paragraph’s before addressing a logical conclusion.
To commence with, we live in an age where competition is huge for the youth and most of us wants to pursue higher studies from abroad so that we can get a good job and for that we need to left our home, there are a lot of merits that enjoyed by the people who left their houses and now leading a persuasive life. For example, research conducted by Nobel university reveals that students who moved to some different city for study are more adaptive in nature, they know how to cope up with the real life challenges, they are more independent and they take accountability for their actions.
On the contrary, people who stays with their family at the initial ages are dependent on their spouse, stayed in their comfort zone and become less responsible. For instance, it is found by the survey that offspring’s who rest with their family are not able to face any hurdle easily, they feel uncomfortable while travelling to another city, they are sensitive in nature, accountability is minimal in them.
In a nutshell, it is indispensible for the youth that they should take accountability for their actions. I opine that people who left houses at an early ages enjoy more advantages of life and become more responsible in nature, that is why they grab good opportunity fast.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81362007168 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78528987699 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544802867384 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1285549531 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.875 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264394649934 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121194118392 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886621969539 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176041758863 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711959151235 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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