Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Total autonomy is the most desired trait of late. It is true that people usually prefer to live on their own these days. There are certain reasons which lead to living solitary. As per my belief, this is a totally negative trend. This essay would further elucidate upon why many individuals choose to live alone?
There are several reasons why people choose to live on their own. Apparently, society has been changed to a great extent, and this change, is possibly because of the literacy in a nation. People are becoming more aware about opportunities and they are realizing the importance of total independence. Besides, imitation of western culture is also a reason behind this trend. Western countries have a culture of self-reliance from a very long period of time which is influencing the other nations as well. For example, people in America, after turning 18, start earning for their routine or even academic expenses. These kind of isolated societies definitely go against the norm of community living.
Now to go with my opinion, it certainly cites a negative impact on the entire society. Firstly, it could deteriorate the ability of socializing among the member of society. As a result of decline in social skills the community spirit will be damaged which is a very serious social damage. Furthermore, it could cause various mental problems and affect society members' health negatively. Currently, the world health organisation has reported about the increasing figures of mental disorders in the society. The enormous amounts of patients suffering from illnesses such as depression and social anxiety disorder simply means that this issue should be considered on an urgency basis.
To conclude, it is evident that there are several causes leading to this common choice of living alone in today's societies. However, this trend could affect the society in variety of deleterious ways and society must ensure that steps are taken to prevent situation from deteriorating further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...more aware about opportunities and they are realizing the importance of total independence. B...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...lture of self-reliance from a very long period of time which is influencing the other nations ...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...heir routine or even academic expenses. These kind of isolated societies definitely go aga...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ocializing among the member of society. As a result of decline in social skills th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66540150569 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4082475578 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.95 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154726812864 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467826757848 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548329381404 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917482364322 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623172270497 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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