Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves.What are the reasons?Is it a positive or negative trend?
People in modern societies have always witnessed some social phenomena or have become increasingly accustomed to them, one of which is the tendency of most people to be single.In my opinion the positive aspects of this issue are more than the negative aspects and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the phenomena that has grown up among the young is living alone, which not only introverts but extroverts tend to be single.The best part of a single life is the silence you can get. Some people grew up in crowded families, and sometimes even find a cozy and secluded corner where they can rest in silence.Some today have an independent, self-made personality, they love freedom. These people think that in a single life they can do whatever they want at any time. In your lonely home, no one is planning for you, but you are free to choose your own lifestyle. From eating time to waking up. What TV channel to watch, or what time to wake up in the morning. Eat food on a plate or in a pot. None of this is different because there is no one else to control you. No one will judge you or even blame you for your unusual behavior.
This social change or group-to-person shift has many positive aspects.Living alone provides a completely solitary environment so that one can discover more about themselves without any distractions. Abilities such as being able to identify strengths, weaknesses, desires, motivations and patterns of behavior.
Basically, just living longer gives you more time to focus on yourself. This leisure time helps you develop your introversion abilities and can ultimately improve your life and those are around you.Living alone provides a proper balance in one's life. With this balance and harmony, you can enjoy your personal life more and more, and value the presence of others in your life more than ever before.Living alone, without the presence of someone, makes you appreciate it more when someone is with you.
In conclusion,It is true that living with others has emotional support for individuals, but I believe that living alone has more benefits.
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but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92757660167 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73990230785 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559888579387 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1716907643 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197729365853 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592991165231 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660199757802 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12010088359 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448336750945 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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