Nowadays more and most researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organisations. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases?
Research and Technology have been playing an essential role in the growth and the development of a nation. Owing to this, a large number of private institutions are funding multiple research laboratories. This essay will discuss the merits along with its demerits in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, the research centres need a significant amount of time and money therefore funded by big MNC's. The government is not able to fund large research projects which require huge financial support, as the authorities are more into public sectors to cover all the basic requirements of individuals. So, private companies provide their full support in the research sectors. For example, scientists are working in the discovery of many vaccines to treat diseases such as AIDS, Cancer, Hepatitis- B and these all are mainly funded by private drug companies.
Secondly, these funding have expedited the research process and has led to various technological innovations in the science sector. For instance, these days it is possible to have designer babies, meaning parents can decide the eye, hair and body colour of a child in the womb of the mother by just altering the genes. So, these innovations have touched the sky and are always pushing for great development to happen.
However, some concerned groups believe that the companies are aiding research institutes for their monetary gains. To illustrate, Fair and lovely, a cosmetic company sponsored by one of the leading corporate companies, claims to improve complexion within the 7 subsequent days, and till date, it covers a great market, despite declaring it as a false research developed product.
In conclusion, after analysing both the merits and demerits, it is crystal clear that research has a great role in mankind's well-being and it should be funded by multiple organisations. Thus, despite having some drawbacks, its positive outcomes outnumbered the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...development of a nation. Owing to this, a large number of private institutions are funding multip...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40131578947 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89572351606 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6316814038 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123229612884 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429848186264 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339782217664 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655437112919 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298484908334 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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