Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries.what are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
In several parts of the world, There is scarcity of youth in universities who are taking science as major subjects.This essay will discuss about the causes and ramification on the society.
Science as subject is more demanding and lot of efforts is required to excel in the examinations by investing time in studying, project work and surveys. Teenagers tend to be under extensive stress due to energy they have to put in to clear the test with flying colours with fewer job opportunities.Whilst, The other subjects like economics and business management is relatively less challenging and have more chances of getting decent employment.
For example, Since 2011 Dr.Batra is giving free consultation for stress management to the students of Birla University after the 2010 survey report conducted by youth club of Dubai that major reason for adolescence to dump science in midway is related to stress.
The shortage of learners in science field will have an adverse effect on the society as less minds in the specific streams will lead to less creativity and invention which will directly affect the furistic development of mankind.
On the Other hand, access graduates in other subjects will result in unemployment in that specific streams which will impact the economy of the nation.
In conclusion, Universities must motivate teenagers to study science subjects by giving them stress related consultation program and by arranging campus interviews for future employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97636303936 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3343920238 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.714285714 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158998718909 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707052393943 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436204366055 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766795926638 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425995735071 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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