It has been observed that these days the intention to choose science as mainstream in university study is minimised by the students in most of the nations. Several reasons can be surfaced upon the investigation, and its impacts on society. Both spurs as well as outcomes will be discussed further.
Discussing the reasons, why there has been a decline in opting science the first one is the difficulty level of the subject. That is science is complicated to understand and it is a vast subject which is very hard to memorize. For example, in biology, several terms have to be learned and remembered and the function of the body is very complex. Second is the long duration to succeed in life. This is is to explain that when someone chooses science as a career option, a lot of patience must be required to accomplish their goals. For instance, to become a successful doctor they have to work for years to gain popularity and get top position in their field.
In reference to the above mentioned causes, effects of these on the society are, firstly there is a decline in medical professionals and paramedical staff. To elaborate due to increase in population there is rising demand for doctors throughout the world. Consequently, the mortality rate is in surge. To illustrate, according to research there is one doctor available for 100 individuals. The second is the prevailing diseases, if there is decrease in health staff then there will be limited research in the field of science which is a negative effect in the society.
In conclusion, when it comes to the science, this is not preferred as a career option due to difficulty level and long term commitment by this disinterest the society is negatively effected.
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88395904437 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84453740128 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0406882578 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197365770615 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540655002105 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378016443335 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107239582253 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203107276827 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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