Most of the people believe that the medical degree and relevant information is expected to be the main skill of the medical staff in hospitals. In contrast, I believe that the major qualities like caring, supportive, positive behavior and better communication skills has its own precedence. This essay will highlight both views in details.
The medical industry is one of the complex industry in terms of attaining knowledge and experience. The medical professionals specially the nurses obtain their degrees which is considered as the prerequisite to grab any job opportunity as the learning experience help them to deliver their responsibility full-fledged. The respective knowledge helps them to take correct decisions in the need of hour. For Instance, In Japan, at the time of earthquake crisis 82% of the affected people were saved by the group of nurses with their splendid work of day and night.
Although, the respective experience is required to perform any job but I believe that many others important skills are essential to outshine in the job of nurses. Firstly, they need to be caring towards the patients as their life is in their hands. In addition to this, positivity is the main key in their jobs as they are helping the doctors while doing major surgery or operations. Lastly, communications skills take the higher precedence as nurses need to provide answers to all queries raised by the patient or their family members.
To conclude, the understanding of the medical field by the nurses is one of the skills which is vital to have, but in my opinion many other important qualities are also expected to attain mainly the speaking skills, positivity and caring nature towards the patients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iver their responsibility full-fledged. The respective knowledge helps them to take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11743772242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8506293274 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4342014831 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161464774705 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541449546198 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487478627149 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900236480675 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632965953573 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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