Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend more time indoors rather than going outdoors. Why do this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
People from different countries, usually stay maximum at home as compared to past, because now in this prevailing era roads and streets are congested with traffics and there are not sufficient parks for walking, playing and exercising. I think this is a negative impact on the society as well as individual.
Increasing the numbers of vehicles on road is a matter of serious concern, because it is not only the source of air pollution rather it is also contributing towards abolishing the fossil fules. Due to the excess pollution, people are suffering from asthma and keep themselves away from pollution is a unique way to stay healthy. Moreover, there are a few parks or grounds where people can sit or walk and either these points are in the centre of cities or very far away from the residential areas. One is full of smoke and another is non-reachable. Therefore people try to avoid move from homes.
Now the consequences are not positive because somehow these issues have become the reason of unhealthy nations. To illustrate, as per a news survey in the year 1990-1995, the rate of patiencewas just 35% but now it has been increased by more than double that is 75%. As per the doctors main causesof all the ailments are less workouts like jogging, walking, exercise and yoga practices and spending the whole day in apartments. They said if people will adopt these outdoor activities then this rate will decrease by 20%. Hence living inside are pushing the society’s health towards darkness.
Conclusively, now people in this current age like to live inside of the home so that, they can escape themselve from early death which is occuring due to some environmental and social issues. Unknowlingly spending all the time indoor is also streching them towards unhealthy issues like depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... of smoke and another is non-reachable. Therefore people try to avoid move from homes. ...
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Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun workouts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...tors main causesof all the ailments are less workouts like jogging, walking, exercis...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...es then this rate will decrease by 20%. Hence living inside are pushing the society&a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0099009901 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7316327478 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0047374089 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198238549039 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606800872388 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432516762537 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115131663202 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279663634292 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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