These days we can see people in some countries consume a large part of their time indoors with respect to outdoors. This could be because of many reasons, but in my view, there is one particular reason which restricts the people to move outdoor, that is the Internet. Where there are so many benefits of the Internet, at the same time we can see the drawback of the same too.
Firstly, I would like to discuss the helpful part of the use of the Internet. The Internet provided us the leisure of working anywhere from the wold and for anybody in the world. Nowadays we can really perform much more activities online like shopping, chatting, learning new skills, etc., which was not the case earlier.
Now if we look into the disadvantages of the internet, it is like an ocean of all types of resource whether it is restricted or unrestricted. Children use to play online games which are unsuitable for their mental health and many more things like that.
To recapitulate in my words about this type of development, I think spending more time inside is a negative development. Because as we know that human being is also a natural creature who requires to be in touch with all the nature for their wellbeing and healthy lifestyle, for instance consuming fresh outside air is always benefits our health. Enjoying the natural water body like river, lakes or sea really rejuvenates our whole body and so on the other natural features, we have on our planet.
- Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend more time indoors rather than going outdoors. Why do this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
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- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.Discuss both these views and give your 67
- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.Discuss both these views and give your 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54882737668 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0842239965 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130474817474 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531301160669 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544251731446 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728000510832 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308208406566 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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