Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they dont really need them.
Why is it happening, in your opinion?
Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?
In the concurrent world, people's habit of shopping is affected with the revolution of consumerization. With this line, it is observed by a vast section of society that numerous products are purchased irrespective of their needs. In my discourse ahead, the plausible causes behind this trend and my belief to consider it as negative development are discussed briefly.
To commence with, the preference of living materialistic lifestyle is one of the key reasons why millennials do unnecessary shopping. This is because that the young generation in particular has become more shopaholic and have tried to purchase things not only to satisfy needs but also to impress others to prove prosperity. Take for instance, according to a report published in the Toronto Times the unexpected upsurge of 20% in selling of four-wheelers by customers having already two or more cars was noticed by the association of vehicle wholesalers in 2019 compared to previous years. Thus, it seems apparent that the change in lifestyle leads to useless purchases.
According to me, it is clear to say that this notion is a negative development by looking towards its dire consequences on the community. In other words, owing to consumerization culture, the importance of money could not be understanded by the mass. Consequently, they may have to suffer from financial crises in the long run. The best illustration is a study conducted by the university of California revealed that the top economists of the word believed that the global economy would have inevitable effects because of over-consumption of people's wealth in shopping. Seen in this light, it has detrimental effects on both individual and society.
To conclude, although the customers are independent to spend money to fulfill the necessities of life, the current trend of
excessive shopping is observed and the valid reasons behind this are outlined above. By considering this negative trend's long term impact on economy, I would suggest that significant stringent measures should be taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, in particular, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11169282236 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8456778764 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104465581134 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309991723046 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167487265906 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507910154155 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122972238563 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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