These days we find people living in big cities have unlimited problems in their regular lives. The main problem includes undisturbed sleep because of heavy noise pollution everywhere. Secondly, varying prices of goods every year with high standards of living making them more stressful and leading to increase number in suicides. Most importantly government must take action by attracting through the advantages living in small towns.
Apartments in large cities though, on one hand it can be occupied with less payment but on the other hand it is held with several issues. Basically living in such a crowded area with lot of noises especially made by the neighbors and outside chores increases stress which is one of the reason. In addition, competitive environment with less paid job offerings make people live with low standards and moreover, cannot satisfy their needs. Other issues involve polluted food leading to health problems such as cardiac diseases. These problems make an individual life difficult in big cities.
Solutions must be taken out by the government to resolve these issues. They must take immediate action by implementing ideas. Firstly, policies must include encouraging them by showing differences in people living in urban areas with people in rural areas like lowering noise pollution in cities through advertising and educating. Secondly, providing offer tickets to stay in rural areas in low prices and reducing tax rates on food by reducing their stress. Although, people cannot completely leave big cities because of educational reasons.
To conclude, government must reduce these problems either by showing them the good things of urban areas or by producing ideas which making less noise pollution. The other solution include lowering the taxes in basic needs of people.
- Many people believe that road quality safety will be improved when the government will decrease the speed limit, other people believe that there are other ways of improving road safety.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Provide some examples from y 67
- Some people think the only purpose to work hard is to earn money.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 56
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 78
- Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38732394366 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57847475018 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2702601761 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218974991081 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737145246577 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689752534409 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139733578171 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471057169331 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.