Few of the masses believe that foremost affects are imperative, Indeed, believe good performance while interacting is essential for confirming the slot. In this essay, I shall examine the view and suggest my opinion.
Although, it is just as crucial to have good first impression so to matter a lot however, the cognitive understanding should be cohesive and coherent. To illustrate, the interaction between the interviewee and the interviewer would last for seconds, if the first and foremost misunderstanding occurs. Moreover, it is vital to be attentive to details such as looking presentable and well organized in communication skills as well as physical appearance. Therefore, to draw first impression it is necessary to have a clear understanding of the requirements and should do accordingly failing which could result negatively.
For an example, there was an interview in an office for the recruitment of Male nurse and there was no proper conduction of an interview process, hence a candidate of different background directly walked in CEO‘s cabin, which resulted in a bad impression on both parties. In some of the cases physical presentation matters not only creates thoughtfulness but also produces synergistic effect.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that a person should presentable and organized this could bring positive vibes for the interviewer. Where as unnecessary flattery could impact negatively and lastly it very important to have balanced interview interaction where both the parties interact coherent and cohesive.
- Some people think the only purpose to work hard is to earn money.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and given way to the new buildings Do you agree or disagree with this statement how important are old buildings to us 87
- living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 72
- You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside. Write: Which arrangements have you already done? Other activities that can be done How can your friend help with the arrangements? 73
- TOPIC 2: Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
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...arties interact coherent and cohesive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58227848101 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26029580615 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5256370568 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.3 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120405766121 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427869735869 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381464974772 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590439896847 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599237685727 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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