Old buildings have its culture and norms associated with it. However, some people believe that these buildings must be block down and in replace new buildings must be made.In this essay I am going to discuss about the importance of old ones and keep my opinion
Old buildings include monuments, museums, universities, holy places. in each country we find these places with a center place of attraction to tourists. these places play a very significant role to country's culture and to people's beliefs. government finds an economic development with these buildings as every individuals life is connected to these places. In some places national day is celebrated by hoisting the flag in old parliament building respected by whole country's people. Although new buildings act as a refreshment with new beliefs and ideas.
Though, it is believed that New buildings must be made not only for country's development but also for a new change. It is effectively seen that old monuments and places are getting destroyed by pollution caused by human activity leading to loss of its original beauty. Additionally, there are various other reasons too. Instead of valuing these places, people come to enjoy as a picnic place and even draw on walls of these buildings. When asked to the peoples of the country there are youngsters who support to destroy the old buildings and build a new one. More over, these museums and universities are completely linked with the higher education to the people.
To conclude, I believe that there is no point of destroying old buildings as there are people's culture and belief with it and new one's can be constructed anywhere for tourist attraction and country's development.
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...ively seen that old monuments and places are getting destroyed by pollution cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76682238722 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3371696233 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317609217673 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114581403718 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089482976943 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226665313663 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514775399861 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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