Most of the masses think that extravagance of automobile commuting can be developed while the authority diminish the momentum level. While others think advancement in different qualitative checks. In this essay, I shall put an emphasis on both the views and suggest my opinion.
Road transport is the basic mode of commuting between places and its quality assuring safety is of major importance. For a broader understanding it should be known that road transport is highest mode of travel usage in any part of the world. For this reason, thinking to curb the speed limit by imposing restriction will not be a solution, however advancing the quality would do it. For an example, many developed countries have placed alternatives to meet the maximum speed limits . travelling destinations under decreased time consumption. Such implementations could improve not only enhanced speed road transportation but also the safety measures.
To name a developing country -India , The Indian transport department have come up with a planned roadway construction as expressways, multi-lane roads corresponding a drive at different speed levels which will enhance reaching excruciating speed , hence allowing commuters less travel time. The advance type of construction with engineering and planning will definitely improve not only maximum momentum in less time but also the safety of the commuter.
In conclusion, i firmly believe that in a rapid developing world one should not fall back, in fact should compete with time. Especially in relation to developed countries one should not think of diminishing pace for safety rather should think of robust yet feasible alternative method or planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49425287356 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02991474785 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3338608296 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203090266454 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705515344668 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379666094134 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106499015794 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598893699454 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.