NOWADAYS PEOPLE PAY ATTENTION MORE ABOUT FASHION, IS IT A GOOD TREND OR NOT? GIVE YOUR OPINION AND EXAMPLES BASED ON YOUR EXPERIENCE

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NOWADAYS PEOPLE PAY ATTENTION MORE ABOUT FASHION, IS IT A GOOD TREND OR NOT? GIVE YOUR OPINION AND EXAMPLES BASED ON YOUR EXPERIENCE

People follow current fashion trends as a way of expressing themselves, personal preferences and sense of style. In my opinion it is mostly a matter of personal preferences. Just like someone follows a certain sport match by match, another one feels that they have to be up to date with the latest fashion trend.

Firstly, fashion is perceived as a way of identifying oneself. People with this belief include celebrities and young individuals. By following fashion trends, an individual is able to show his identity to his peers and also express oneself. For instance, a person who considers himself as a German automobile enthusiast could buy every new model of his favourite Mercedes Benz vehicle. This way, everyone would appreciate him as a passionate trend setter when it comes to the automobile industry. In addition to proving one’s identity, a person is also able to derive confidence by keeping up with the latest fashion trend.
By following fashion trends, people are able to impress others. This impression could be on a personal relationship level or a business level. This is because most people appreciate individuals who have a unique lifestyle. A business client could also award such an individual a contract simply because he likes the way he dresses. On a personal level, a person could impress someone else for purposes of starting a relationship by simply following fashion trends. On the same note of impressing others, a person can advance his career by being up to date with fashion trends. At an interview stage, this could sway the interviewers your way by simply impressing them with the way you dress.
In conclusion, it is clear that most people follow fashion trends in order to gain success in one way or the other.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80162164764 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3806943328 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1764705882 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122291855838 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477179259064 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338938588474 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919493205499 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211999105814 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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