Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throw away society outweigh any possible economic advantages?
"Modern culture is a consumerist one".It is also known as disposable culture. But the irrevocable issue is:whether this use and throw culture is really beneficial or a big harm to the society? This essay shall delve into both the possibilities and shape up my opinion at the end. Talking about the pros of the throw away society, people affirm that it is a way by which community moves forward both personally and economically. Use of the latest gizmos like funkiest cars, function laden watches, smart phones,tiniest video cameras and fastest computers are few examples of our modernization. Advanced technology has made man progress from walking barefooted in the jungles to take the first step on moon. Use of this technology has improved our lifestyles personally and is a big economic boost for our country on the whole. We would have been savage and uncivilized without the adoption of new advancements. On the other side are the cons which are alarming and need immediate action. Throw away culture has created an ultimate pull on the production of materials which in turn depend upon the natural and other additional resources. Recent calculations by 'Oil corporation of India ' reveal that non renewable resources like coal and petroleum would not be available for use by our future generations. Secondly, simply discarding the things will result in even bigger garbage stacks in the outskirts of all cities which can already be seen. Ultimate results of these waste heaps are pollution,health related issues and sloppiness. There can be no single conclusion after weighing both the sides.No doubt development is need of the hour but it would be better if it is sustainable. Use of 3R's i e 'Reduce, Reuse and Recycle' is the best way to tackle the existing problems related to environment. Advancements on the cost of pollution would be a wrong choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, no doubt, talking about, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98036209018 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63961038961 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.094586771 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108784576729 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302656838107 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470462631746 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108784576729 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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