Technology is developing strongly, so more and more payment methods have been create to make human's life become easier. Many people prefer to payable in credit or debit card than cash because in some reason. In my opinion, this trend have both disadvantages and benefits are worth thingking and pondering.
First of all, using cards to pay are save time and space in the wallet. For instant, customers pay a bill in plastic money have to wait the restaurant for a few time to check the invoice but payable in cards not need to check the invoice because the machine will do it. Moreover, credit card can hold a large limited amount of money. If carrying too much cash with them will be noticed by thieves and affect their safety while credit card is carefully confidential and easy to carry. Furthermore, Using card is easily to purchase equipment on the internet without going to the store or payment when delivery.
On the other hand, the card costs a lot of monthly maintenance fees and tranfers. Against, payable in plastic money does not cost any fees but also a huge saving from it. Buying online and payable in cash is limit being scam than cards. For example, many online shop received money from purchaser will subtitute false article for true one.
In conclusion,payment in any methods will have their own benefits in differrent situation.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sdrocks91
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...more and more payment methods have been create to make humans life become easier. Many...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...money have to wait the restaurant for a few time to check the invoice but payable in car...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , payment
...lse article for true one. In conclusion,payment in any methods will have their own bene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8025751073 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52744153814 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618025751073 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0397545126 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177669034264 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610996702463 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403066147713 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929531833695 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616184666606 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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