In recent years, it becomes far more normal for kids to have more duties then it was in the previous century. Although some people think that it is a negative effect because it makes a huge pressure on children, I believe than it is a positive effect because it prepares them for the adult's life.
On one side of the argument, some people argue that children having more responsibilities have more pressure. It happens because in most cases kids are not ready for this, which leads to an increased level of stress. It can cause mental and physical problems, such as memory deterioration, lower logical ability, sleep disorder, frequent flu, e.t.c. For example, my friend Tom had lots of responsibilities in his childhood because he had 4 little brothers. It led him to lowered assessments at school because he did not have enough sleep, and, therefore, it negatively affected his logical ability.
Despite this argument, I believe that it is a positive trend because it prepares kids for real life. It teaches them that every action has consequences, about their future responsibilities, and develop their feelings of awareness. All this leads that children become successful adults. A particularly good example is my sister, who had lots of duties in childhood, which helped her to get a hight band on the final exams at university. It happened because she understood her responsibilities about it, set a goal, made a plan, and committed herself to actions. All these skills she was taught in her childhood when her responsibility was to take care of little brothers.
In conclusion, although an increased level of responsibility can harm children through pressure, I believe that it helps them to become successful adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more duties than'?
Suggestion: more duties than
...ecomes far more normal for kids to have more duties then it was in the previous century. Althoug...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ore normal for kids to have more duties then it was in the previous century. Althoug...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...effect because it prepares them for the adults life. On one side of the argument, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06993006993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99876088972 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5530011058 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112145324933 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419071591117 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459881183261 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731529599723 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010368168089 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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