Nowadays, teenagers are found to be using drugs either the prescribed ones or the illegal. This essay will enlighten some of the possible reasons behind this growing trend and also present feasible solutions.
Nowadays, teenagers are found to be using drugs either the prescribed ones or the illegal. This essay will enlighten some of the possible reasons behind this growing trend and also present feasible solutions.
Possibly, the problem seems to stem from the urge to enjoy life. As adolescence consider drug abuse as alternate for excitement which lighten their senses providing them with the opportunity to experience new scenarios; whether its legal, for instance anti-depressants like Xenax, or the illegal drugs like marijuana, both serves this purpose. Another cause might be the involvement of young generation with bad company indulging them in these activities while presenting this one may call as cool. Most of these young addicts could be linked with small street criminals as per the report provided by the US Department of Child Care.
Turning toward the viable solutions, young ones need to be involved in exciting activities. Parents and educational institutions both can arrange opportunities for provision of joy, for example, sports tournaments and trips to new places. This culture can also be minimized by proper awareness and counselling. For this purpose, from the early age, instead of avoiding this topic, parents should discuss this with the young so that they could understand the detrimental effects it causes. Secondly, schools should arrange seminars showing abusers stories and strict laws should be practiced leading towards the fear of involvement restricting them from these cases.
In conclusion, while excitement and bad influence could be the possible reasons in triggering this culture, initiatives taken by schools and parents can help eradicate this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the illegal. This essay will enlighten some of the possible reasons behind this growing tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52692307692 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78098733053 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0279536719 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404620945358 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160714453921 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199503698394 0.0667982634062 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35372731542 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.3738047008 0.056905535591 657% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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