Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, technology is is playing a vital role in changing behaviour of lifestyle of humans on entire globe. Eventually, this robust technology is also has tremendous impact on the interpersonal relation between them. Also, the way of interaction is moving to another level due to this advances. Apart from this, the way of bonding has aslo changed. Eventhough, many people is taking it negatively but as an optimistic person I am taking it as a positive move.
Firstly, to discuss the ways in which these uplift system affected types of relationships I would like to mention that, it provide us the concept of social distancing but emotional attachment. For an instance, in case of an emergency when a belonging one staying too far from a patient and not be able to reach them in personal then video calling facility give a emotional comfort. Secondly, an individual can make thousands of relations with hthe help of available best suitable features of technology. This is the way by which humans find their matching people on world and make social as well as professional group.
In conclusion, with this enormous advantages of technology in relationship building. Not only that but also, the providing easiest way to creat new relations and sustaining it this facility is very usefull. I believes that use of finest technology in personal and occupational relation has only value addition. I look it as positive move for living creature like us. Thus, I recommended that every invention is for betterment of humans lives and all has to accept it in prosperous manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ction is moving to another level due to this advances. Apart from this, the way of b...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the easiest'.
Suggestion: providing the easiest
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...ing it this facility is very usefull. I believes that use of finest technology in person...
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Suggestion: of the finest
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'valued'.
Suggestion: valued
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02290076336 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93698755987 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9704231123 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296330949772 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930168154383 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583392573011 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188998461266 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560674944037 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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