In recent years, there were a rapid increase in rubbish produced by people all over the world, especially in developed countries and developing countries. Some countries have even formulated relevant policies to prevent an overwhelming amount of rubbish.
The causes of excessive waste are due to the development of economic and the competitive between companies that people need to involve more time in work. Everything coming rush and people prefer to take away and have a meal as simple as possible that lead to producing more and more disposable tableware and takeout box. Also, the purchasing ability rises with the increase of income, people would rather buy a new product to replace the old one.
In my point of view, the government should educate and prompt how to recycle to a citizen. If the recycling awareness can be trained from a small start, it will not only allow them to sort correctly and quickly, but also improve the efficiency of recyclers. As for the promotion of recycling, the government can introduce giveaways to attract public attention. Such as, people can get a pack of toilet paper if 1kg of paper materials is recycled, or they can use a functional old mobile phone to trade in a new mobile phone in order to get a discount.
Of cause, rises the sale tax or garbage levy is one of the methods to reduce rubbish production. However, too many and too high tax rates will reduce the appetite for consumption, thus it will affect the country’s economic system. So education is a good way to make recycling a civic responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: Of course
...le phone in order to get a discount. Of cause, rises the sale tax or garbage levy is ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88014981273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77365542981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1370846761 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169962204432 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534760240355 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421704824745 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900702854102 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287105541574 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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