In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Today's world is faster than ever. People need to move across cities due to professional or other reasons. Considering as the safest and fastest transport option many prefer hi-speed train over others modes of transportation when they travel from one city to another. Hence, these people believe that government should spend hefty amount of money on the development of new rail ways. While, others think existing public transportation systems like highways should be developed first due to its versatility and easy accessibility.
'Safety' among all other issues is the major concern for the commuters who have to travel across cities every day. It is quite difficult to ensure overall safety on the road while driving a car by oneself. Because there are so many nonprofessional unskilled drivers on the roads who are prone to accidents. Moreover, it is fairly hard to keep one’s concentration for a long period of time during a long drive from one city to another. High-speed trains allow the commuters to relieve these tensions by leaving the driving responsibility to skilled professional hands.
'Efficiency' is another big issue. Nowadays, the big cities are becoming quite unaffordable for many, so they have to live in outskirts small cities away from their working stations. These people have to travel hundreds of kilometres each day to reach their offices. They just don't like to spend ages on the roads. So, they prefer the most speedy method of transportation which allows them to travel a longer distance within a shorter time. Hence, high-speed rails are becoming popular day by day.
Others, however, believe that high-speed rails are much more expensive than the existing modes of transportation. Moreover, it is not as accessible as the traditional vehicles like buses or motorbikes are. So, existing systems should get priority over such an elite system like high-speed rail, and people would be more benefited by the development of the existing systems.
In conclusion, public transport is a sensitive issue which affects us all. So, government should handle this issue meticulously by focusing on that sector which would be most beneficial for us. In my opinion, significant amount of money should be spent on them development of high-speed rail as it is the safest and efficient mode of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22933333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89317971942 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4804062712 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1363636364 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190083743817 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511797643389 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551605593052 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110677121784 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768782964855 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.