People are living longer and as a result, growth in life expectancy is observed due to improvement in medical care facilities. In my opinion, advancement in medical facilities is certainly aiding people by curing them of life threatening diseases which indeed is a benefit to the society and does outweighs its drawbacks.
Firstly, Quality of supervision in hospitals and medical expertise provided by doctors has drastically seen a change over the years. With the development of medicines, we now have a cure for diseases such as yellow fever, polio, malaria etc. which used to take hundreds and thousands of life a century ago. For instance, without medical science, people used to have a life expectancy of around 20-30 years due to which they were unable to take care of their children which led to a slowdown in children's skill level development, as their parents used to die before they enter teenage phase of their life and they were left on their own to sustain their living. Yellow fever itself took more than 10 million lives in India before it's cure was developed which itself increased life expectancy to 40 years.
Secondly, Doctors and scientists are yet to find a cure for various types of cancer and disease such as AIDS. Moreover, there are some disease for which we don't have a solution yet and medicines can only aid the patient in living a longer life rather than a quality one. As the patient might need many resources and assistance for each trivial task, It is often thought that it is wastage of resource which can benefit other patient in dire need of it. Also, medicines used in treating a disease may have side-effects and can have an adverse effect on other organs which might lead to a new disease altogether.
To conclude, Improvement in medical science does help people live longer but does not ensure them of a healthy quality life. Advantages of medicine still outweighs disadvantages that it brings along with it.
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? 61
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- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 22
- Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 91
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87687687688 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316541231 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6883020626 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231685027299 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922048104835 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939772849656 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177871523213 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984791540446 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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