Online shopping is significantly increasing
What effects does this have on the environment and the types of jobs required？
Discuss both views and opinion.
Owing to the COVID-19 pandemic, people prefer to stay home to defuse the situation. Shopping online has become a new reality. People can browse a sea of products at their fingertips, no matter groceries, foods, or clothes. Everything that the shopper need will deliver to their door after a click of the check-out button. However, the convenience of online shopping exacts a toll on the environment. Meanwhile, the surge of online shopping also increased the need for some jobs.
First of all, the augment of online shopping has caused detrimental effects on the environment, for example, the increase in solid waste. All products we purchase from the e-commerce shop are overpackaged. For instance, when a consumer buys a box of Lego from a brick-and-mortar retailer, the only package of it will be the original box. However, if the customer buys the same box of Lego online and delivers it to their home, it will be repacked with another box or even a pile of bubble wrap which will send to the landfill site most the time.
On the other hand, there are serval jobs created because of the raise in online purchasing. The growth of it has brought about a higher demand for delivery service, in this way it provided more jobs in the logistic process. For example, in the warehouse, more packaging workers are required, after that, drivers and couriers are needed to send goods to different areas. Furthermore, online customer service officers are also required to handle numerous after-sale services such as the request of refund, logistic enquires, and so on.
To encapsulate, the development of online shopping has created plenty of job opportunities in different aspects. However, the unwanted impact on the environment such as solid waste caused by overpackaging should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he need for some jobs. First of all, the augment of online shopping has caused detriment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13395638629 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86868698363 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2339181051 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301760988298 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099381415785 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108523470306 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167307022721 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110048600469 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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