The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...combating the rate of traffic accidents.However,i vigorously disagree that this is the ...
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...ng the rate of traffic accidents.However,i vigorously disagree that this is the on...
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...r punishments can be uphold in many ways ,primarily on motorist's finance.Tho...
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...s ,primarily on motorist's finance.Those who drive while intoxicated are confisc...
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...ause of the danger for other road-users.This attempts of government is not futile ba...
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... road-users.This attempts of government is not futile based on accidents are decre...
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... accidents are decreasing significantly everyday.However,it's not effective in poor...
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...ecreasing significantly everyday.However,it's not effective in poor countries ,the ...
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...t's not effective in poor countries ,the citizen are not able to afford for h...
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...e to afford for heavy traffic penalties.In that case,the government can convert dr...
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...for heavy traffic penalties.In that case,the government can convert driving penaltie...
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...infrastructure to facilitate safer road.Besides,the most overwhelming way deriving succ...
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...ructure to facilitate safer road.Besides,the most overwhelming way deriving successf...
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...ents is essential but not exclusive way.In my estimation,there are massive numbers...
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...l but not exclusive way.In my estimation,there are massive numbers of aids should be i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16560509554 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91563844488 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71974522293 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.016738835 49.4020404114 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.666666667 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 20.7667163134 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246312047529 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181640415908 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385625896171 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181640415908 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385625896171 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 50.2224549098 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.05 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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