Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
Overpopulation has been the major concern of various nations from the past decade in their metropolitan cities. There are enough research and evidence that prove that these issues are going to life-threatening in the near future. In this essay, we will discuss some of these major problems and the way to resolve it in detail in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, air pollution is one of the life-threatening issues in these urban areas. Since the last decade, the majority of cities have raised the issue of difficulties in breathing, lack of fresh air in the environment. Furthermore, the traffic congestion and lack of greenery in the environment has made it destructive and difficult to survive with such conditions. Various ways this problem can be solved. The individuals and government authorities need to take a stand and make everyone aware to understand the future outcome of these problems. Although the electric vehicles and green buildings are the initiatives taken by various nations but expanding and act on these initiatives is the responsibility of every individual to get better results.
The second major problem of these crowded cities is the probability of an outbreak of infection. History has witnessed the majority of disease spread are incepted from metropolitan cities and resulted into epidemic or pandemic. Steps must be taken to avoid these serious concerns, such as high hygiene awareness among individuals is a must, vaccination of the newborn against infections. Mainly the hospitals are the primitive source of spread of these infections, Isolations of Hospitals and infected individuals from the crowded city can add up in tackling this concern.
In conclusion, various initiatives have been drawn to resolve these issues by the organizations but only the initiatives from the government will not solve the problems. It is the responsibility of every individual to work on them on practical levels to get better results
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n practical levels to get better results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34193548387 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10395001944 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8896254961 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173781889704 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580044083167 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376378240296 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102625126532 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186069876566 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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