Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic problems are increasing day by day. Many individuals believe that the solution of traffic and transportation glitches is to persuade villagers and suburbs people to reside in urban regions. In my opinion, although cities have most of the facilities but introducing villagers to city will make the problem more complex.
It is irrefutable that residing in city regions will help an individual to reach on destinations within time frame. City routes are interlinked with each other and the frequency of buses are also high in numbers on highways as compare with villages, therefore living in urban regions can solve the issue of transportation for villagers. For example, city routes in Bangalore are connected with each with in short distance of 2 km, which helps the traveler to bypass during his needs.
However, the introduction of villagers to city will make urban places overcrowded and more complex. The increase in population means introduction of more vehicles and more number of commuters, which results in upsurge of problems related to living conditions in the society. Hence, the problems of traffic and transportation will increase only. In addition to that, other problems could also increase such as sanitation, hygiene and pollution. In overall, the quality of life may deteriorate. For instance, mostly cities like Mumbai is already classified as most polluted city in the world, therefore, with addition of suburb people will make the situation worsen
In conclusion, the admission of country side people to city will not bring any solution to traffic and commuter problems, instead it may multiple other problems and make it chaotic for everyone. Hence, I disagree with the opinion and believe that the authority should find some other alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31205673759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85792723861 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9047650173 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203663695676 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722589576807 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487504302105 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135083853931 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412473303506 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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